I liked (name) essay a lot. We have similar opinions on metaphors and the effect of them on people. He talks about how much of a positive effect metaphors and medicine have.I think he did a good job with the quotes that he used. Some tips I would give him is to watch grammar and spelling that he uses. I noticed a lot of mistakes in his essay with that. I would also advise him to use quotes at some points in his essay for a better explanation of what he’s discussing. Overall he did a great job, and had a lot of good points that I agree with. He did a good job elaborating on many of his points, as well as making a connection to metaphors with each example.
Sophie Horton
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Sophie,
You left your peer some useful and specific suggestions. That’s something to celebrate! As you write your next 150-word note, be sure to directly address your peer. Remember that it’s meant to be a letter TO your peer recapping your lingering impressions. Keep up the good hard work!