Blog #18
Brainstorm Session for Essay Im choosing to write about the effects social media has on women. And I made a cluster to brainstorm ideas.
Monthly archives: October, 2019
Blog #17
Essay Introduction I choose to use the article “Social Media Effect on Young Women’s Body Image Concerns: Theoretical Perspectives and an Agenda for Research” written by Richard M. Perloff. He talks about how social media, a topic that all all know too well. Social media is apart of our everyday lives, it’s an arms reach …
Blog #16
Naysayer Paragraph Although I think that art isn’t apart of science, Writer Johana Lehere who wrote “The Future of Science…Is Art?” would have to disagree. He claims that art enhances science. It allows the scientist to think more, and use art as a creative tool. Lehrer states “Science needs the arts. We need to find …
Blog #15
TREAC Paragraph Art is very important, and can effect many aspects of education. It can make someone use creativity to solve a problem. You may wonder how, but art is a creative tool we use that we can expand our thoughts on. Lehrer agrees with this, and thinks that art has a great effect on …
Blog #14
Annotating comes pretty easy to me. I just write down my thoughts as I’m going through a paper as thoughts come up. Ive been doing well with my annotation goals. Ive made a lot more text-self, text-world, and text-text connections. Ive also been looking up words I don’t know to get a better understanding. Surrounding …
Blog #13
Chapter 8 “They Say I Say” 1) 2) After reading over a previous piece that I’ve written, I noticed that I used a transition, pointing term, or key term at least once in each sentence. And that’s because those elements are very important to sentences. And will create a better paragraph overall in the end. …
Peer Review #2
(Peers name), your essay was very good, and was easy to understand and follow. It was interesting and wasn’t boring to read. I like how you added your own opinion was evident in the essay. I would just add more to some paragraphs like examples of personal narratives, more quotes, just to show the reader …
Blog #12
Re Vision Strategy After the peer editing session, I released that I want to start out with a new thesis. My peer suggested that I try connecting my ideas more. My ideas at this point are all over the place, and don’t have the best sense of direction. I have many ideas of what I …
Blog #11
Barclay Paragraph Our lives consists of narratives, and they are all around us. We use narratives to tell a story. We all are our own stories, and use narratives to explain life events. Julia Beck who wrote “Life’s a Story” believes narratives are what makes us, us. “Each of us constructs and lives a “narrative””(Beck). …
Blog #10
After reading Strawsons essay a second time I noticed a lot more things. I released that she was talking about how people have their own narratives of their lives, but they can decide what they want people to hear. And I agree with that because say you want to tell someone about something that happened …
