Comment to Peer
(Peers Name) Your paper is not yet finished, but you are heading in a good direction. I can tell what you want to get across, but your thesis needs to be more developed. You immediately introduce Ma, and Lehrer in your thesis more than your own point/ your own voice. Id love to overall hear your voice more in your paper. Remember the text from class is there to help you with supporting or arguing with your opinion! You’re headed in a great direction keep up the good work.
