Re Vision Strategy
After the peer editing session, I released that I want to start out with a new thesis. My peer suggested that I try connecting my ideas more. My ideas at this point are all over the place, and don’t have the best sense of direction. I have many ideas of what I want to write about. But I didn’t do a good job of connecting them, and having the paper overall make sense. So if I re write my thesis I can then go on to expanding, dropping, and adding to my body paragraphs. New skills I am working on is better introductions to sources, adding more “meat” to the paper. My top goal is to overall be happy with my paper, as well as have a much more narrowed thesis. My thesis is my biggest concern for the paper at this point. I need to figure out the arguments I want to make. My biggest challenge is knowing what I really want to write about. I have ideas, but I’m un sure of what the main point I want to get across is. I have a good idea of the direction I want to take this paper. And I am looking forward to making edits for a better paper over all.
