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(Peers name), your essay was very good, and was easy to understand and follow. It was interesting and wasn’t boring to read. I like how you added your own opinion was evident in the essay. I would just add more to some paragraphs like examples of personal narratives, more quotes, just to show the reader …
Re Vision Strategy After the peer editing session, I released that I want to start out with a new thesis. My peer suggested that I try connecting my ideas more. My ideas at this point are all over the place, and don’t have the best sense of direction. I have many ideas of what I …
Barclay Paragraph Our lives consists of narratives, and they are all around us. We use narratives to tell a story. We all are our own stories, and use narratives to explain life events. Julia Beck who wrote “Life’s a Story” believes narratives are what makes us, us. “Each of us constructs and lives a “narrative””(Beck). …
After reading Strawsons essay a second time I noticed a lot more things. I released that she was talking about how people have their own narratives of their lives, but they can decide what they want people to hear. And I agree with that because say you want to tell someone about something that happened …
“I am not a Story” Free Write: After reading Galen Strawsons “I am not a Story”, I released he has a different view on narratives. He talks about how narratives are us. We all have stories, and without them we don’t live fully. We all have stories weather we like it or not. And many …
“Life’s Stories” After reading Julia Becks “Life Stories” I thought she did a really good job laying out her piece. Everything she wrote made sense to me, and I agree with what she has to say as well. One part that stood out to me was the beginning. She starts it out with a part …
Rubric/ Revision Areas of the rubric that provided me with the greatest learning opportunity/ confused me… The position and intro section of the rubric really helped me go into my paper and go down the bullet points and check each section of my paper. I put myself in the position of the reader to make …
I liked (name) essay a lot. We have similar opinions on metaphors and the effect of them on people. He talks about how much of a positive effect metaphors and medicine have.I think he did a good job with the quotes that he used. Some tips I would give him is to watch grammar and …
Draft #1 After reading “Shitty First Drafts” by Anne Lamott, I released that just because my first draft has a lot of areas to work on, doesn’t mean my paper is a complete fail. She talked about how all good writers don’t have a first draft that is amazing. And its only human to have …
Introductory Paragraph Metaphors are a good tool when expressing or writing. They can make a reader think of a different view on something. Or they can influence someone to do or think something. Metaphors open your mind to a different way of thinking. In medicine they are used to do the same thing. Khullar discusses …
